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__ Monday 11th July 2011 __ On the day before Halloween Fred decides to have a monster party so he invites over his three best friends Bill,Steve and Bob over for what he hopes will be the best party in history.As Bob bill and steve are all told that their will be nice hot popcorn with extra butter chocolate that will melt in there mouth they all decide and say to Fred “we will all come to your monster party we will even bye the tickets” so all buy tickets to L.A. On the way to the airport they find that the sky is starting to go lime green and blueberry blue and they wander to them selfs that that is not normal and if it is just there amazing eyes and. As they are speeding towards the airport like a cheater after is prey, their hearts racing with excitement, they weave in and out of cars to ensure they get to their flight on time. They finely think that they have gone crazy and they go to lots of people and ask if they think the sky is a different colour. They just laugh say that it looks fine. So they go on the giant plane and as it is taking off they can feel the hot jets thrusting the oversized plane off the ground. As they look out the window see lots of little dots in the atmosphere and bill screams “meteors are going to destroy the earth” so everyone looks out the window with a scared face and they all laugh at him and say “what the hell do you mean”. He looks out the window once more and they are twice as big so he decides to just enjoy the ride and relax so he tells bill and Steve that he is scared and they tell him that it is probably our heads and he should get some rest so he shuts the blinds on the airplane and they have a sleep and as they are dreaming they realize that they are having the same dream and it is a big alien and it tells them what is happening and he said that they are the chosen people and that this only the start of there journey and that there is a big step ahed of them so they start to worry and as that happened the alien disappears and they wake up and they finally are determined to stop this and free the world. reflection: today I am taking apart my story one paragraph at a time and making them better

__Friday 9th July 2011__ OLD on one new years eve fred invites his friends Bill,Steve and Bob over for what he hopes will be the best party ever they all buy tickets to L.A and on the way to the airport they find that the sky is starting to go green and blue and they wander to them selfs that that is not normal and if it is just there eyes and.As they are driving they realize that the sky is starting to go a purple colour and they finely arrive at the airport.

NEW On one fine new years eve Fred invites his three best friends Bill,Steve and Bob over for what he hopes will be the best party in history. so Bob bill and steve all buy tickets to L.A. On the way to the airport they find that the sky is starting to go lime green and blueberry blue and they wander to them selfs that that is not normal and if it is just there amazing eyes and. As they are long,bumpy,bendy road driving they realize that the sky is starting to go a purple colour and they finely arrive at the airport without missing it.

Great change Jack Names have capital letters and some parts don’t make sense but big improvement anyway Karlj

__Thursday 16th June 2011__

Tuesday 14th June 2011

LI:we are learning to use personification and alliteration in SC: when you give a non living objet e.g like a tree human characteristics e.g the tree waved to the other tree the wind whispered past me the thunder growled the clouds burst into tears the river roared and shouted the rain spat at me the painting stared at me  the mud spat at me  the vines grabbed my leg the quick sand trapped my leg the waves pound me on my back

Thursday 9th June This is our prior knowledge of simile displayed as a wordle document

a simile is compering something that is not alike using like and as eg: he is as big as a house eg: she was as slow as a slug eg:it was as small as a mouse

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document a metaphorare compering two things of two unalike things not using like or as eg:he is a big house eg:she is a slow slug eg:it is a small mouse Topic: Identifying Similes Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. 1. The car was as dirty as a pile of dirt 2. The candy was like heaven __3. His hands were as big as____.__ a a4 piece of paper __4. My little brother sounds like a__ __.__ monster __5. My room is as messy as__. pig __6. School is like__. hell 7. The chair was as hard as a __.__ piece of gold __8. Her hair looked like__. stone 9. The monster’s breath was like. 1000 pigs farting in your face 10. The water was as cold as. snow 11. My lunch tasted like. choclate 12. The rabbit was as soft as __. wool Metaphors Metaphors are imaginative ways to describe something by comparing that thing to something else. For example, if I wanted to say that Dan is tall, I could say that Dan is a giant.

Use a metaphor to describe somebody who is:

tall my dad is a tall tower kind Ork is a kind fast bill is a very fast mouse slow Bob is a slow ant smart Steve is a smart ladybug fat Fred is a fat bever sneaky Joan is a sneaky angry Karen is a angry squirrel beautiful Emma is a beautiful flower ugly Frank is a ugly pig stubborn Paris is a stubborn short Liam is a short plant thin Clank is a thin chip silly Sam is a silly horse scared easily Pat is a scared easily ant He is a giant. he is a giant giant She is an angle

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